I lay down wide awake,
Suffering from troubled heart break,
Tears in eyes n smile to fake,
Why am i pretending for heavens sake?
I feel like a forfeited song,
Which i have been singing all day long,
But the unending lyrics tell me i was betrayed,
Informing me that i have been slaved...
I feel lonely, broken n lost,
Has this something to do with my past?
I try to complete this puzzle to solve the mystery,
But somebody told me that i was now history..
Wish i could believe in something new,
Oh please somebody tell me its not true,
It was I who really sticked on to you,
Knowing i was lost i backed off too...
Now every little part of me goes on to strike,
Not getting what u want is just called life,
I even betrayed my own feelings, only,
That should be the reason I m so lonely........
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ReplyDeleteHey, thats a good piece of work. Your words have a lot of depth. try to steer away from rhyming words. It will make your poem even more beautiful. Would like to read more from you :)
ReplyDeleteThnx again Chandrama!! well that tip will certainly help me a lot.. i ll make sure that not too much concentration is on rhyming.. comments from a writer is the best i can get,, thnx again :)
ReplyDeleteToo good
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